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Band 5+: You have borrowed something from your friend and it has got damaged. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter, • apologize for damaging the product/stuff • explain what happened • say how are you going to fix the issue

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Dear Sanjar,

I hope this letter will find you well. It is shame that I have made such a terrible mistake with you and feels sorry for that the phone which I have borrowed from you and it has got damage.

First and foremost, I would like to personally apologize for your inconvenience; now I explain what happened with the phone. While I am using it, I dropped it suddenly and it has broken, I felt guilty.

Moreover, it is also my fault that I didn’t care with that if this telephone mines, I would care with that.

Secondly, even if it is an unforgettable mistake in my life. I would like vanish my faults by fixing your telephone. I have many acquaintances from phone workshop I think so they are fixing this and it seems a new phone.

I hope that you would take into consideration and accept my apology as it is highly necessary for me.

I look forward to receiving from you,

Yours faithfully,

Sayfullayev Saidakbar.

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B1 - Intermediate
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phone: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, the explanation could be more concise and direct.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly understandable, but the flow could be improved with better sentence structure and paragraphing. Numerous grammatical errors impact the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is sufficient, but more precise and sophisticated word choices would enhance the letter's impact. Some word choices are slightly unnatural.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

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