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Band 5+: You have heard that there is a part-time job available in a nearby shop. Write a letter to the shop's manager, applying for the job

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Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing to you to express my interests in your job advertisement for a shop assistan that I saw posted on the instagram of June 20th 2025. My name is Nilufar and I am 19 years old. As I have currently moved to Jizzakh as a qualified shop assistant. I would therefore like to apply for this position.

I noticed from the job discription that you require someone who good at dealing with customers, two years of sales experienced and responsible for their work. My previous job was a shop clerk at Korzinka deal with some requirements that you requested. As I eemphasized earlier, I have twoo years of experience and over past year I have worked at three different supermarkets. I should also point out that I am highly courteous and articulate. Also I effortlessly build rapport with customers.

I noticed that this is part-time job, so it is suitable for me. My preferred days for working would be Tuesday, Thusrday and Saturday afternoons and evenings. I would aslo be to work two Mondays of each month.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Your faithfully

Normamatova Nilufar.

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Overall Band Score

5.5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
years: 3
would: 3
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Task Response

6.5
The letter adequately addresses the task by conveying the applicant's interest and relevant skills. However, some aspects of the task could be more fully developed.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5
The letter's message is mostly understandable, but the flow could be improved with better paragraphing and clearer transitions between ideas. Grammar errors affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

5
The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context, but a wider range and more precise word choices would enhance the letter's impact. Some lexical errors are present.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4
While some grammatical structures are used correctly, there are several errors that affect the clarity and accuracy of the message. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed.

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