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Band 4+: You have heard that there is a part-time job available in a nearby shop. Write a letter to the shop's manager, applying for the job

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Dear sir or madam

I am writting this letter to apply for the position of books shop which i have heard my new neighourd .I have moved here recently from other city for find a new job as my previous work no extra money . I live nearly in your store and before i moved here,i worked some shops and supermarket as a shop assistant thatʼs why I have enough experience working in my provious work.Even better that I am friendly and polite with costumers which they visited.In addition to i like different books then i promise desire to work in your books shop.

With regards to working hours,i work futher work at 8 a.m to 2 p.m so i will be available after 3 p.m till midnight every day.I hope you have found my details interesting.I would be glad to hear a positive reply from you.

Your faitfully.

Gulzoda Isroilova

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses the task, but it could be more specific about the job requirements and the applicant's skills.

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The letter lacks a clear structure and flow. The ideas are not well-connected, and the writing is difficult to follow.

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