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Band 6+: You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: • correct the information in the article • explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information • suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to inform you about a mistake abou my home town which was included in your magazine last week.

Firstly, I am grateful on which your magazing has published the historical importance of our town. However, you had mentioned that the there was hitroical kingdom 400 years ago, but this duration should be recitified as 600 years.

Recitifying this mistake is extremely important for our country’s trouist industry as my home town is a major tourist attraction and it gives large contribution to the country’s economy. Otherwise, people who are intersted in visiting this town might get wrong idea abou the value of its history.

Therefore, I kindly request you to recitify this mistake in the next edition of youtr magazine which release next week. Furthermore, invite people to visit our town in the future.

I hope you will execute my request.

Yours Faithfully,

Pumang Prasad

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mistake: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task and provides relevant information. There are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, but overall the message is clear. To improve, focus on using more precise language and proofreading carefully for errors in grammar and spelling.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent and logically organized, but there are some areas where the flow could be improved. The introduction clearly states the purpose of the letter. Transitions between paragraphs are present but could be smoother to enhance the overall readability. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to link ideas within and between paragraphs more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of variety and precision. While the language is generally appropriate, incorporating more sophisticated vocabulary could elevate the letter. For instance, instead of 'big contribution,' you could use 'significant contribution' or 'substantial impact.' Also, ensure that the word choices accurately convey the intended meaning.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but grammatical errors are noticeable and impact clarity. There are errors in article usage, verb tense consistency, and sentence construction. For example, 'about my home town' should be 'about my hometown,' and 'there was hitroical kingdom' contains spelling errors and incorrect grammar. Proofreading carefully and focusing on accurate grammar and sentence structure will enhance the letter's overall quality.

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