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Band 4+: You Have Not Received the Prize Which You Have Won at A Newspaper. Write a Letter to The Editor of The Newspaper with Below Details: Details of How You Won the Prize? What Is the Prize Given to You? What Actions Do You Expect to Be Taken?

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Dear Sir/Madam,

Here i am Jhon one of your game show participant. Last month i was a participant at a game show and won a prize bond. But unfortunately i didn’t recieve any my gift yet. So im writting you a letter of dissatisfication.

There’s a raffle and after that its decided that the winner will get a big prize bond. And it was already revealed what will be the winners prize and that was a food factory which i’m in need of.

Its a hubmle suggestion to look into this matters ASAP and please keep a track of your promises regarded prizes. Somtime things got delayed and its perfectly fine but please inform the winner about the dedlay so that no harm can be done at any cost.

Looking forward for your acknowledgement.

Yours Sincerely,

Maria.

Word Count: 137

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task, but it could be more detailed and specific in explaining the prize and the expected actions. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter lacks a clear and logical flow. The ideas are not well-connected, and the paragraphing could be improved.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally appropriate, but there are some instances of less precise or formal language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect the clarity and fluency of the writing.

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