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Band 5+: You Have Not Received the Prize Which You Have Won at A Newspaper. Write a Letter to The Editor of The Newspaper with Below Details: Details of How You Won the Prize? What Is the Prize Given to You? What Actions Do You Expect to Be Taken?

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Dear Sir/Madam,

Hope this letter finds you well. I was a participant in your game show which held in last month. I’m writing you this letter to show you my concern regarding the receiving of prize. In your game show I took part in raffle and fortunately I won a prize as winner and the amount of prize was pre-announced to the audience so I was very much happy after I won that prize as I was in a dire need of money to support my college fees.

As it was informed earlier that the prize amount willed be wired till the mid of the next month but unfortunately another month is about to end. As I have already mentioned I need to submit my college fees as I’m the only earner of the house

well I know sometimes thing may not go as you planned but I suggest that if there’s any delay you should inform the winners to hold their horses for a while. So that you’ll have enough time to sort it out and the winners will remain patient.

Looking forward for your acknowledgement.

Yours sincerely,

Maria

Word Count: 190

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Overall Band Score

5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

prize: 5

month: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter effectively addresses all aspects of the task, providing clear details about the prize won and the expected actions. However, it could be more concise and focused.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's message is generally understandable, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The paragraphs could be better structured for a smoother reading experience.

Lexical Resource

5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but some choices are not entirely accurate or natural. There is room for improvement in using more precise and sophisticated language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly impact the clarity and fluency of the writing. There is a need for more careful attention to grammar and punctuation.

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