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Band 6+: You have recently gone to live in a new city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: explain why you have moved tell about the city invite your friend to come and visit you

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Greetings Natasha

I hope this letter will find you in good sprint

I am very delighted to inform you that I relocated from the capital city to the new branch in the Northern province. This movement happened after receiving a promotion transfer to a new branch as a station manager

Unlike working from a big city with a big population and huge traffic jams , this town has a small population and few people own cars. This arrangement has made it easy for me driving to and from work without passing through congention. This city is know for having quiet a number of beautiful tourisms sites which makes it a good place for me who likes visiting places.

On the contrary the city has few shopping malls and supermarkets, this has been a challenge for me. I am required to drive long distances to access a small shop were to buy groceries, to solve this issue I have no option but to buy in bulk.

Discribing this city by writing may not be enough, If it would be okey with you, make a date to come over this coming monthend, I would like us to catch up and explore some of the beaultiful tourism site together. It will be nice to see you after a while .

Should you face challenges with the bus tick, I am more than ready to chip in.

I hope to hear from you as soon as possible

Yours sincerely

Terence

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all parts of the task, providing clear reasons for the move, describing aspects of the city, and extending an invitation. The content is relevant and sufficiently detailed. To further improve, consider elaborating slightly more on specific aspects you like or dislike to provide a richer description.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent and addresses all points in the task. However, the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider using more varied linking words and phrases to connect ideas smoothly. For example, in the third paragraph, you could use a phrase like 'Despite these advantages' to introduce the contrasting point about the lack of shopping malls.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied and precise. For instance, instead of 'good sprint,' use 'good spirits.' Also, consider using synonyms for words like 'beautiful' and 'nice' to enhance the letter's appeal. Using more specific vocabulary related to the city and your experiences would also improve this aspect.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'congention' should be 'congestion,' and 'Discribing' should be 'Describing.' Pay attention to verb tense consistency and subject-verb agreement. Proofreading carefully before submitting would help catch these errors. Also, 'bus tick' should be 'bus ticket'.

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