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Band 5+: You have recently gone to live in a new city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: explain why you have moved tell about the city invite your friend to come and visit you

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Dear Jenifer,

I hope you are doing well.

I am exited to share a news with you that I’ve moved to the Barrie from Toronto for my job opportunity.

Last week I got joining offer from an architect firm, and the joining date was very soon so I had to shift here; so did not got chance to tell you but, near to here there is a lake called George lake which is the main attraction of the city and there is many more water activities to do. Moreover, downtown is the second good place of the city, and there is famous dessert shop as well.

I wanted you to invite on the weekend as it is a long week and I am hoping that you can come so we can visit the places together and cherish our memories again.

I can’t wait to meet you.

Best Regards,

Bhoomi

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all parts of the task, providing relevant information about the move, the city, and an invitation. There are a few minor grammatical errors, but they do not impede understanding. To improve, focus on refining sentence structure and grammar for greater clarity. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter generally addresses the task, but the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider dedicating separate paragraphs to each point mentioned in the instructions (where you moved, how the city is, and the invitation). Transition words could also be used to link ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied and precise. For example, instead of saying 'the joining date was very soon,' you could use phrases like 'the start date was immediate' or 'I had a very short notice period'. Using more descriptive language when talking about the city would also enhance the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For instance, 'I am exited to share a news' should be 'I am excited to share some news'. Also, the sentence structure in the second paragraph is somewhat convoluted. Aim for clearer and more concise sentences. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage throughout the letter.

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