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Band 9: You have recently gone to live in a new city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: explain why you have moved tell about the city invite your friend to come and visit you

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Dear friend,

I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to inform you that I have recently moved to a new city. When we last met, I told you that I was planning to pursue a master’s in public health. As you know, the course that I chose is unavailable in our city.

Firstly, I got admission to Marwari University. I am so excited to give you this fantastic news. The university campus is amazing, and the professors are quite friendly compared to my past university teachers.

Secondly, I do a part-time job because I had a lot of free time after college lectures. It will surprise you to hear that I got a job in my dream hospital. I will get plenty of experience from this occupation.

Lastly, I live in an apartment. It is quite spacious and comfortable. I would be glad if you would come to visit. We will explore the whole city together and enjoy a good time.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Task Response

The letter appropriately covers all requirements of the task, explaining the reason for the move, describing the new job, and inviting the friend to visit. The information is relevant and sufficient. To further enhance the response, consider adding more specific details about the job or the city to make the letter even more engaging.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is very well-organized and easy to follow. The paragraphing is logical, and the transitions between ideas are smooth, contributing to a seamless reading experience.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and varied, demonstrating a strong command of the English language. The word choice enhances the letter's clarity and engagement.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates excellent grammatical accuracy and uses a range of sentence structures effectively. The punctuation is also accurate, further enhancing the readability of the letter.

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