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Band 5+: You are having problems with a neighbour's animals because the fence between your properties is old and In poor repair. You want the neighbour to pay half the cost of building a new fence. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter: say what the problems are explain how a new fence will solve the problems suggest that the neighbour pays half of the cost

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Dear Mala,

I am writing to tell you that sometimes your dogs are breaking my fence since they are trying to enter to our premises. It is a significant issue to ensure my privacy and security.

I suggest that when we repair the fence with heavy concrete pillars then the dogs can not damage it. I would prefer to stay peaceful and tranquil environment hence this fence will be a pivotal impact and be a massive advantage.

I sincerely appreciate it if you could contribute half of the cost of the full repair since I am unable to bear full cost. I will take an quotation from a constractor on tomorrow and will let you know your potion.

Thank you very much for your understanding in this regard.

Yours,

Piyum

Word Count: 130

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

fence: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task requirements by outlining the problem with the neighbor's dogs, explaining how a new fence would solve the problem, and suggesting that the neighbor pays half the cost. There are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, but the overall message is clear. To improve, focus on using more natural and precise language and proofread carefully for errors. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the organization could be improved. Consider dedicating a separate paragraph to each of the three points mentioned in the task instructions: stating the problems, explaining the solution, and suggesting cost-sharing. This would enhance clarity and flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and varied. For example, instead of 'significant issue,' you could use 'serious concern' or 'major inconvenience.' Also, 'pivotal impact' and 'massive advantage' are somewhat redundant; choose one or find a more nuanced expression.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For instance, 'your dogs are breaking my fence since they are trying to enter to our premises' should be revised for better grammar and flow. Also, 'I will take an quotation from a constractor on tomorrow and will let you know your potion' contains errors in article usage, spelling, and word choice. Proofread carefully to correct such mistakes.

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