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Band 5+: You have recently joined a sports training program and would like to tell your friend about it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - explain what the training program is - describe why you think it is beneficial - persuade your friend to join the program as well

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Dear Rohan,

I hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to inform as well as recommand to join indoor cricket program that is located near to our house.

I believe this activity crutial for not only maintain physical health but also remove our stress level. There is mainly one thing remember that they do not provide any equipments, like as; bat, ball ,and stumps. So, we have to either buy these equipments or buy rent tools for two hours. I recommand you this activity because we do not have enough time to maintain our health by doing gym and other activities. Therefore, I personally like this activity to maintain health as well as refresh my mind with playing my favourite game with different way. Lastly, I like this indoor cricket because they have good heating as well as cooling facities. Also, they provide free water facility when you feel thirsty by playing this game.

I hope you can think about my point and I am waiting your prompt responce.

Thank you,

Jigar

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5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

activity: 3

maintain: 3

health: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The letter adequately covers the requirements of the task, explaining the training program, describing its benefits, and attempting to persuade the friend to join. There are some minor lapses in providing details and clarity. To improve, provide more specific details about the benefits of the program and strengthen the persuasive elements.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of ideas could be improved. Consider using more explicit transitions between points to guide the reader. For example, when transitioning from explaining the program to its benefits, a phrase like 'One of the main reasons I find this program beneficial is...' would help. Additionally, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to enhance clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks variety. To improve, try to incorporate more specific and descriptive words related to sports and fitness. For instance, instead of 'maintain physical health,' you could use 'improve cardiovascular fitness' or 'enhance physical endurance.' Also, be careful with word choice; 'crutial' should be 'crucial,' and 'recommand' should be 'recommend.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'activity crutial' should be 'activity is crucial'), correct article usage (e.g., 'the indoor cricket program'), and proper sentence structure. Avoid run-on sentences and ensure each sentence conveys a clear and complete thought. Proofreading carefully before submitting can help catch these errors.

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Band 5+: You have recently joined a sports training program and would like to tell your friend about it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - explain what the training program is - describe why you think it is beneficial - persuade your friend to join the program as well

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