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Band 5+: You have recently moved to a new city and want to join a local sports club. Write a letter to the club manager requesting information about membership. You should include details about: - your interest in the sport and your experience level - why you want to join the club - any questions you have about membership fees and schedules.

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Dear Manager

My name is Miuru, I recently moved into the city for my higher studies and was wondering if I can enroll with your sports club. I can play multiple sports for example basketball, volleyball,cricket and paddle but I am mostly intrested in playing basketball. I played for my high school basketball team, I had an average score of 10 points per game.

I did some research about the best sport clubs in the city and came across your sports club. I read some reviews about the club and I am impressed by the reviews. I would be honored to join your club.

I have a fexible schedule and I can move my lectures if needed to except on fridays as i have lectures the whole day. I can dedicate upto 4 hours of my time each day except on fridays as I mentioned before. I hope I meet the requirements to join your club. I would apprieciate if you can provide me with more details about your club and also fees.

I am looking forward for a reply

Thank you

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

sports: 3

basketball: 3

about: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. More detail could be provided in some areas to elevate the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

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Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate, but a wider range and more precise word choices would improve the letter's sophistication.

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