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Band 5+: You have recently returned from an afternoon at your public library, and noticed various negative aspects that could be improved upon. Write a letter to the manager of the public library. In your letter: Describe the poor experience you had Include ideas for what the library should change Explain why you feel the library needs alteratio

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Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing this letter regarding several negative things in the public library that I suspected.

Firstly, Although you have a bunch of categories of books, they are unorganized. So, when someone searches for a book on the shelves, they would be confused.

Secondly, your furniture is too old and ripped and whenever people sit on them and move, they are very noisy, lastly, your staff are untidy and their clothes are unsuitable.

Furthermore, I will suggest to you about my concerns with these problems. Probably you should require some individuals to organize the book and then hire a carpenter for your furniture that would fix it, I think it would be better to purchase some set clothes that all of them have been organizational suits.

Thank you for your consideration, please feel free to contact me for any assistance my contact number is 9851199839 and my email address is sthpriya321@gmail.com. I am looking for your positive response.

Yours faithfully

Priya Shrestha

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5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by describing negative aspects, suggesting improvements, and explaining the need for changes. However, the suggestions could be more detailed and persuasive.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly clear, but the flow could be improved with better transitions and paragraph structure. Some sentences lack logical connections, impacting overall coherence.

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The vocabulary used is appropriate but not particularly sophisticated or varied. More precise and descriptive language would enhance the letter's impact.

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