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Band 4+: You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, - Explain why you changed jobs. - Describe your new job. - Tell him / her your other news.

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dear Jack,

how are you doing my friend? I am writing this letter to inform you that have recently joined in SBI bank as a cashier.

as you know that, my previous job was in Amazon Werehouse where the workload is to much high, my backpain is also started and i got tired at the end of the day. Additionally, i am from commerce background and i need to work in the bank after completed the course. well i have give my resume to many bank and i got lucky to get the job in sbi bank. Moreover there is no more workforce or no backpain and feel relex at the end of the day.

as a cashier in sbi i have to make entries of deposit and withdrawal of coustmer. furthermore i have to just count the cash at bank and give report to manager.

while doing job i have heard that you have started learning about stock market and start doinng investing is this news real.

Best wishes,

John

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter adequately covers the task requirements, explaining the job change, describing the new job, and sharing other news. There are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that could be improved. For example, 'workload is to much high' could be 'workload was too high'. Also, consider elaborating slightly more on the 'other news' section to enhance the personal connection.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat clear, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Paragraphing is present, but the transitions between ideas are not always smooth. Consider using transition words and phrases to connect your ideas more effectively and create a more cohesive flow. For example, you could use 'Furthermore' or 'In addition to' to build upon previous points.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally adequate for the task, but there are instances where more precise or varied word choices could enhance the letter. For example, instead of 'to much high,' you could say 'very high' or 'excessive.' Expanding your range of vocabulary and using synonyms can make your writing more engaging and accurate. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Errors include incorrect verb tenses ('have recently joined'), subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing ('no more workforce'). Focus on improving your understanding and application of basic grammar rules. Review verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure to enhance the accuracy of your writing.

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