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Band 5+: You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, - Explain why you changed jobs. - Describe your new job. - Tell him / her your other news.

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Dear Rohit,

I hope this email finds you well. I want to inform you that currently I joined a new company which is located near by your hometown. Once I start to go to the new company, I can visit your house. My job is so flexible so, I request you to manage time to meet me.

Perviously, my working place and job was so uncomfortable and a lots of time I have to spend at work. It was difficult to manage to give time for my families. So I change the job.

My new job will start from tomorrow and I am so excited to join my new working colleagues and before I join this company, I already visited the all new place which one is located inside the company so its very easy and comfortable for me . If I compare about my pervious job and this current job, current job is so comfortable and flexible for me.

Suddenly, I remember to inform you, I got pormotion in new working area and now I am working as a supervisor. Now a lots of responsiblity are taken by me. Its little hard but I am really enjoy. to As well I will like to share you a new upcoming rule about the companies and for employer it is so useful and full of benefits.

I hope you will reply my email as soon as posssible.

Best regards,

Govinda Pandey

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

company: 4

working: 4

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task requirements, explaining the job change, describing the new job, and sharing other news. There are some minor lapses in providing sufficient detail and clarity in certain areas. To improve, focus on providing more specific details about your new job responsibilities and the benefits of the new company rules. Also, pay attention to grammatical accuracy and clarity throughout the letter.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization could be improved for better flow. Consider dedicating separate paragraphs to each of the task's bullet points: explaining the job change, describing the new job, and sharing other news. Transitions between ideas need strengthening to ensure a smoother read.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is somewhat limited, impacting the clarity and depth of the message. Try to use a wider range of vocabulary to express your ideas more precisely and vividly. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'comfortable' and 'flexible,' explore synonyms that better convey the nuances of your new job.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar and sentence structure need significant improvement. There are several errors in verb tense, sentence formation, and punctuation that affect the clarity of your writing. Focus on constructing grammatically correct sentences and using a variety of sentence structures to enhance the overall quality of your letter. Proofreading carefully before submitting can help catch many of these errors.

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