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Band 5+: You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, - Explain why you changed jobs. - Describe your new job. - Tell him / her your other news.

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Dear Sam,

I hope this letter finds you in good health. I want to share good news with you. I started my new job in well-renowned company.

My previous company was good but as you know i want to work in this company and as was waiting for this opportunity from prolonged time.

Now i work in this company as HR and working environment is also very quiet, and all staff members are humble and supportive. My new boss is very cooperative. All in all every thing is in my favour.

In the next week there is big event in our company that will be about to success of our company as this company establish good image in the market and took first position to gain trust and loyalty of customers.

I hope, we will meet you soon.

Love

Radha

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

company: 6

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by explaining the job change, describing the new job, and sharing other news. However, the explanation for changing jobs could be more detailed. The description of the new job is somewhat general. To improve, provide more specific details about your reasons for wanting to work at the new company and elaborate on your responsibilities as an HR professional. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the flow could be improved with better transitions between ideas. Paragraphing is present but could be used more effectively to separate distinct topics. Consider using more cohesive devices to link sentences and paragraphs for smoother reading.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in using more precise and varied language. Some phrases are a bit generic. Try to incorporate more specific and descriptive words to enhance the impact of your writing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are noticeable grammatical errors that affect clarity. Sentence structure could be more varied and accurate. Focus on improving your understanding and application of verb tenses, articles, and sentence construction to enhance grammatical accuracy.

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Band 5+: You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, - Explain why you changed jobs. - Describe your new job. - Tell him / her your other news.

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