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Band 5+: You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter provide information about yourself, give details of your previous work experience, and say why the company should consider you for the job.

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Dear respected Manager,

Good day Sir/maam.

I have heard that your company is hiring for a teacher. I am am writing this letter because I am interested for the job, and willing to undergo the process. I am Mae Ann Lilibios, 24 years old. I am from Puertobello, Tudela, Camotes Cebu. With a bachelors degree of Bachelor of Secondary Education Major in Science, and a new Licenced Proffesional Teacher, I took the Licence Examination last March 2024. I worked in Phil. International Language Academy (PILA) for almost three months. I believe that my work experience there is also one of the factors for you to consider me for this job. My experience from my previous work will be beneficial in your company. I am glad to impart my knowdge, skills, and capabilities in your company.

Thank you and I am looking forward to hear from your good office.

Mae Ann Lilibios

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Word Count: 152

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter effectively addresses the task by providing information about the applicant, their work experience, and why they are suitable for the job. However, the letter could be more concise and focused.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the flow could be improved with smoother transitions between paragraphs and sentences. The grammar errors also affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but some words are used incorrectly or in an awkward manner. The applicant could benefit from using more precise and sophisticated language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors, which affect the clarity and fluency of the writing. The applicant should focus on improving their grammar and punctuation.

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Band 5+: You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter provide information about yourself, give details of your previous work experience, and say why the company should consider you for the job.

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