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Band 5+: You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter provide information about yourself, give details of your previous work experience, and say why the company should consider you for the job.

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Dear Sir,

I hope this letter finds you well.I am writing to you because I’ve seen in the advertisement that your company is hiring I would like to apply for a job.

I studied Business Administration at Nortwestern University and graduated last 2022 currently I am looking for a job that allign to my skills.I am a hardworking and dedecated to my work.This would be the reason why i always finished my contract in my job.Recently,I worked at Jollibee Plaza,Vigan City as a cashier for six months.I was awarded as the best Cashier.I will provide my certificate upon your request if needed.

I would say I am capable for this job because of my hardworking,communicating skills and dedication to work.I will use my skills for the best possible way to achieve th company’s goal.I hope you will hire me.

I look forward to your response.Thank you.

Your’s faithfully,

Jenny

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

would: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter effectively addresses the task by providing information about the applicant, their work experience, and why they are suitable for the job. However, it could be improved by being more specific about the advertised job and how the applicant's skills align with the company's needs. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the flow could be smoother. Some sentences are grammatically incorrect, which affects the overall cohesion. The letter could benefit from more logical transitions between paragraphs and ideas.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The letter uses a range of vocabulary, but some words are not used accurately or appropriately. The applicant could use more specific and impactful language to highlight their skills and experience.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, articles, and prepositions. These errors affect the clarity and professionalism of the letter. The applicant should focus on improving their grammar and punctuation.

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