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Band 5+: You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter • explain why you think you would be suitable for the job • say what else you could do for the family • give your reasons for wanting the job Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ,

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Dear Maria and Jack,

This is Youssef Ossama, I am an Arabic teacher.

I am writing this letter to apply to your advertisement for someone to teach your two children Arabic language for a year.

Firstly, I think I am suitable for the job, because not only I am a native Arabic speaker, but also I am an Arabic teacher In my country. I have been teaching for primary Grades since 10 years ago.

secondly, I can help you with some house work to pay for my stay at your house, and I can help in your garden because I like growing plants as it is one of my hoppies.

one last thing, I need this job as I am planning to travel to Australia. thus, accepting me will help me with getting the visa .

I am looking forward to hear from you, If there is any updates please let me know.

Faithfully,

Youssef Ossama

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

arabic: 4

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Task Response

The letter addresses the main points of the task by explaining why the candidate is suitable for the job, mentioning additional help for the family, and giving reasons for wanting the job. However, the response could be more detailed and specific to the couple's needs.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter is somewhat coherent and cohesive, but there are some issues with transitions between ideas and the overall flow. Consider organizing the information more logically and using linking words to improve coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

There is a decent range of vocabulary used, but some words are repetitive, and there are a few inaccuracies. Try to vary your vocabulary more and pay attention to word choice for better precision.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

While the letter demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, there are errors in verb tense consistency, prepositions, and plural forms. Review grammar rules, especially regarding agreement and tense consistency.

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