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Band 5+: You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter • explain why you think you would be suitable for the job • say what else you could do for the family • give your reasons for wanting the job Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ,

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Dear Sir or Madam,

Hope this letter finds you well. I am Mohamed Hesham, I am writing to you after watching your ad asking for someone to teach your kids Arabic. I think that I am ready for this mission.

Let me tell you that arabic is my first language and I have been working as an Arabic teacher for 5 years. I am passionate about my job and love helping children to fully understand and speak Arabic.

I am patient and ready to be your son’s and daughter’s tutor. I can help them with many other things like studying English, doing some exercises, and getting ready for their exams.

I need this job because I am jobless in this forigen country. I want money, so I can take care of my family. I promise to do my best to make sure that your childern have the best education.

I look forward to hearing from you. And if there are any updates, please let me know.

sincerely,

Mohamed Hesham

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

arabic: 3

ready: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the main points of the task by explaining why the writer is suitable for the job, mentioning additional help for the family, and giving reasons for wanting the job. However, it could be improved by providing more specific examples of teaching experience and how the writer's skills align with the children's needs.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is mostly coherent and cohesive, with ideas presented logically. However, there are some minor issues with transitions between paragraphs and the overall flow could be improved for better coherence.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, but there is room for improvement in terms of variety and sophistication. Consider incorporating more diverse and precise vocabulary to enhance the overall quality of the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

There is a range of sentence structures used, but some grammatical errors are present, such as 'forigen' instead of 'foreign' and 'childern' instead of 'children'. Proofreading for such errors and ensuring accurate grammar usage throughout would enhance the letter.

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