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Band 4+: You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter • explain why you think you would be suitable for the job • say what else you could do for the family • give your reasons for wanting the job Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ,

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Dear Sir.

I have seen an advertisement from a couple who live in Australia for someone to teach their to children your language for a year. I would like talk to you about my flied I’m a good English teacher I have also 2 years experience I teach many student and I’m a also loving for children and i am a suitable for your requirement.

I also read an other activity like art making food so part time I teach your children activities and one think more I need a job further more I sport my family members and I need more money for my New Cross I have English master degree but my plan I started for new corse for helping my future so I hope you understand my all situation.

Looking forward your response.

You sincerely,

Ayesha.

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

teach: 3

children: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, the response could be more detailed and organized for a higher score. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization and flow could be significantly improved. The ideas presented are not always clearly connected, impacting the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

While the letter demonstrates a sufficient range of vocabulary, more precise and sophisticated word choices would enhance the overall impact. Some lexical errors are present.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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