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Band 6+: You have seen an advertisement in a local newspaper for a part-time job at a bookstore. Write a letter to the bookstore manager. Explain why you are interested in the job Describe how your previous experience makes you a suitable candidate Provide your availability for an interview

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Dear manager,

I am writing to express interest in the job at the bookstore. I am new in the city andI am looking for a part-time job; this would be perfect for me. I worked for three years at the national library in Kansas, I really love books and the feeling they transmit. I had no problems in my last job however, I had to leave it because some personal events. This job would provide me with more work experience to improve my abilities and I would be honestly grateful. I am available for an interview this weekend; I could be there Saturday morning or Sunday afternoon. If that is not possible, I am available any time next week.

I look forward to your reply,

Yours faithfully

Manuela

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. Minor improvements in structuring the response would enhance clarity and impact. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly clear. Improving the flow and logical connections between ideas would strengthen coherence.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task. Expanding the range of vocabulary and using more precise language would enhance the letter's sophistication.

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5.5

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