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Band 5+: You have seen an advertisement on website for job opening at a book store you decided to apply for the job. Writ a letter to manager of the book store . In your letter introduce your self and describe your skills and experience Explain why are you interested in the job.

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I have seen a job opportunity for your advertisement for the position opened.

My name is Harsimran Kous. I am currently a diploma student at Sheridan College pursuing chemical laboratory technology. I am 23 years old.

I have previous work experience of working in a library as a guard for 3 years. I also have experience in a retail store. I have plenty of customer service experience. My hobbies are polite, and friendly. I am also good with computers and can speak English and Punjabi.

I really want to get this job because it would help me to improve my communication skills more and increase my knowledge. One of my friends also works there. The work environment is safe and the co-workers helped each other anytime. So, I want to be a part of your great team.

That is all about me i hope you would consider my application abd i would here back from you soon

Thankyou

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

experience: 3

would: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by introducing the applicant, mentioning skills and experience, and stating reasons for interest in the job. However, it could benefit from a more structured and detailed presentation of qualifications and a stronger articulation of the applicant's suitability for the specific bookstore position.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly understandable, but the flow is disrupted by some organizational issues and grammatical errors. Improving the structure and correcting grammatical errors would significantly enhance coherence and cohesion.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is functional but lacks range and precision. More specific and descriptive language would strengthen the letter's impact and demonstrate a wider vocabulary.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for achieving a higher score.

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