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Band 5+: You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you. Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.

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Dear sir

I’m writing this letter to you to dissatisfaction about the accommodation in your College. Here, I would discuss my trouble with you.

Actually , I’m dispointed by my room mate behaviour because they showing inappropriate behaviour with her friends front of me .However, I’m discuss this problem with my roommate but they always argue with me. It situation challenging for me. moreover, two day ago he organised party without taking my permission.moreover, he always breaks my personal things for example yesterday evening he breaks my tea cup and it was gifted by mother on my mother this situation difficult for me .

Therefore, I want single room due to,lack of concentration on my study without any intervention. I would be change my room for next session. I hope you understand the whole situation.

I’m looking forward from you.

your sincerely

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C1 - Intricate
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Task Response

The letter addresses the task but lacks detail and clarity in explaining the issues. More specific examples and a clearer request would improve this aspect. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization and flow are inconsistent. Improving sentence structure and paragraphing would enhance coherence and cohesion.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks range and precision. Using more sophisticated vocabulary and precise word choices would improve this aspect.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity and understanding. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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