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Band 4+: You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you. Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.

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Dear Sir/Madden,

I am writing to inform you that I feel disregard to my room because of the disturbance of my college, whom we live in together some block.

He or she usually bring the room for his friends, and they had been doing many things, which cause me to feel uncomfortable for this room. Additionally, they played unwanted games and make hazel and Basle for the room. This led to me to be hopeless for this issue. On the other hand, he had thrown everything inside of the house.

I would like to change the room, if there is other empty room which is good and suite me to read and sleep when I complete my reading tasks.

For your response is good to me and I hope that I would get the response for my compliance.

Best regards,

Word Count: 140

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

4.5

The letter addresses the task but lacks detail and clarity in explaining the situation. More specific examples would strengthen the request. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization and flow are somewhat disjointed. Improving sentence structure and paragraphing would enhance readability and coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks range and precision. Using more precise and descriptive language would improve the overall impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors and inaccurate word choices detract from the overall clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial.

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