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Band 6+: You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you. Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons. You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as follows

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Dear Sir/Madam

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to ask your permittion to have a new single room next term as I can no longer bare sharing my current room with Sandy – as student in my class.

The reason for my demand is that Sandy is really annoying. She kept inviting friends to our room and throwing parties, having fun together. This has made it very difficult for me to focus on my study due to the intensive noise. Moreover, they sometimes even borrow my things like books or toys without my allowance, causing misconceptions and frustration.

I would really appreciate you letting me stay in a new room for the next term. As I will need to study hard for my graduate examination, a single-room with quite surroudings and a green view from the windows would make best for me.

I believe your accommodation office would manage this easily. Thank you for your consideration to this matter. I look forward to your prompt response.

Yours faithfully,

Emily

Word Count: 173

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

would: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by clearly stating the request for a new single room and providing reasons. However, some aspects of the explanation could be more concise and impactful.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly clear, but the flow could be improved. Some sentences lack a smooth connection to the preceding ones, affecting the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context, demonstrating a good range of words. However, more precise and sophisticated vocabulary could enhance the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

While the letter conveys the message, there are grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy would significantly enhance the score.

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