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Band 4+: You missed a friend's birthday party because you were unwell. Write a letter to your friend apologizing for missing the celebration. You should include details about: - why you couldn't attend the party - how you feel about missing the special occasion - what you plan to do to celebrate together in the future.

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Dear Sam,

I read your letter yesterday . I was upset to find out that i forgot about your birthday. I’m really sorry but I have the reason.

I hope you can forgive me. Five day ago family practitioner diagnosed a cancer of grandmother. I was shocked and I had to help her go to hospital. I was fatigue. Her ill is exhausting all of my life energy.

I recalled about celebration last night. I was very astounded and I didn’t know what I can do. Today I can bring all of my power and now I’m writing it for you. Happy birthday, dear friend. I want to believe you can forgive me.

if you have holidays on this week, I offer you to meet in bar and drink some rice wine. I have the gift for you. It must make you happy. I promise it. After bar we can go together to confectionery. I can bye chocolate cake for you. You adore it in childhood.

I know it’s my fault that I forgot about your birthday an but I really want to see you glad.

Seen you soon,

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

about: 3

birthday: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter addresses all parts of the task, but some aspects could be more fully developed.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's message is mostly understandable, but the numerous grammatical errors and awkward phrasing affect the overall flow and coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate, but there's room for improvement in word choice and precision.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly impact clarity and understanding.

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You missed a friend’s birthday party because you were unwell. Write a letter to your friend apologizing for missing the celebration. You should include details about: – why you couldn’t attend the party – how you feel about missing the special occasion – what you plan to do to celebrate together in the future.

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