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Band 5+: You moved to a new country and you want to write a letter to your former colleague. In your letter, you should: tell him/her where did you go and what you are doing there (job) describe your feeling invite your friend to come."

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Dear Jeno,

It was been a short time since. I spoke to you I am writing this letter to inform you that I have moved to Canada my career as a nurse in at Northern hospital. It is one of the popular hospitals here, and I consider my self luckly to have been selected here.

Life is grant in Canada. It has a tremendow more time temperate climate with summers being worm and winners being cool due to its pronimity to the attontic ocean It has an almost pleasant weather throughout the year there is not much snowfall though nearly 60% of the population in Canada have foreign origins If circustances are favorable I am planning to story herw at least for the next five years.

I know you have a strong back ground in Canada. Canada has plenty of opportunities for it I can arrange for an interview at Rubhins hospital it self please do send me your resume Even otherwise. Feel free to come here for a holiday Canada is such an artistic place.

Looking forword to better to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully

R.Vithusan

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Overall Band Score

5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

canada: 6

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. More detail and precision in the description of the new job and life in Canada would improve the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

5

The letter's message is mostly understandable, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Improved sentence structure and paragraphing would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is sufficient, but lacks range and precision in places. More sophisticated word choices would improve the lexical resource score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

Numerous grammatical errors significantly impact the overall clarity and fluency of the letter. Improved grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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