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Band 9: You promised to help a neighbor with their garden but failed to do so due to unforeseen circumstances. Write a letter to your neighbor apologizing for not keeping your promise. You should include details about: - what prevented you from helping - why you are particularly sorry for letting them down - how you intend to make it up to them

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Dear Jane,

I hope you’re doing well. I’m writing to sincerely apologize for canceling our plan to work on your garden at the last minute. Unfortunately, something unexpected came up and I had to attend to it right away. I truly didn’t anticipate that it would interfere with the time I had promised you.

I realize that my cancellation may have caused you inconvenience, especially since you might have adjusted your schedule or prepared tools and materials based on our plan. I feel bad knowing that I may have left you waiting or caused you stress when you were counting on my help.

I genuinely want to make it up to you. If you’re still comfortable with it, I’d be happy to come by on [propose a specific day/time] to help with the garden, or at another time that suits you better. I can also help with any additional tasks that may have piled up because of my absence.

Thank you for your understanding, and again, I’m very sorry for breaking my promise. Please let me know when I can make things right.

Warm regards,

Fajri

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Overall Band Score

9

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

9

The letter appropriately satisfies all requirements of the task. It is well-written and addresses all three bullet points clearly and effectively. The tone is suitable, and the apology is sincere. There are no omissions or lapses.

Coherence & Cohesion

9

The letter is very well-organized and easy to follow. The progression of ideas is logical, and the use of cohesive devices is natural and effective. Paragraphing is skillfully managed, contributing to the overall clarity of the message.

Lexical Resource

9

The letter demonstrates a wide range of vocabulary used accurately and appropriately. The language is natural and sophisticated, enhancing the overall quality of the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

9

The letter exhibits a wide range of grammatical structures with full flexibility and control. Grammar and punctuation are used appropriately throughout, contributing to the letter's clarity and effectiveness.

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