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Band 6+: you will move to a new city for work. you know people who live there.write aletterto someone you know who lives there. in your letter -ask them for help in findingb accomodation -tell them where yopu would like to live -tell them the type of places you are lookig for you should write atleast 150 words.

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Dear rahul

Hey! I just wanted to tell you about that I will move to your city, where you live next month, so I need a room.

To begin with, i got a job there in a multinational company as a software engineer which is why I will relocate to your city. I need a private room with attached bathroom and also located near to the bus stop, so I can easily commute to my work place. Furthermore, I need your help to find me a good room or you could you give to me contact number of any landlord because you have been live there for many years.

As a result, it will be convenient for me to find a suitable accommodation there before I move.

Can you help me to get a room? Any lead would be appreciated.

Looking forward to hearing from you!

Best wishes

Pranshu

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Overall Band Score

6
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
there: 3
Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

8
The letter appropriately addresses all parts of the task, explaining the reason for moving, describing the accommodation needed, and requesting specific help from the friend. The information is relevant and sufficient. To improve, consider adding more detail to enhance the personal tone and make the requests more specific. For example, you could mention a preferred budget for the accommodation or specific features you're looking for in the room. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

5
The letter is generally coherent, but the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider dedicating a paragraph to each of the points mentioned in the task: explaining the reason for moving, describing the accommodation needs, and specifying the help needed from the friend. Transition phrases could be used more effectively to connect ideas between sentences and paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

5
The vocabulary is adequate for conveying the message, but it could be enhanced with more varied and precise word choices. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'room,' consider alternatives like 'apartment,' 'studio,' or 'accommodation.' Using more specific vocabulary related to accommodation and relocation would also improve the letter. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5
The letter contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. Focus on improving sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and the correct use of articles and prepositions. For instance, 'I just wanted to tell you about that I will move' can be revised to 'I wanted to let you know that I will be moving.' Proofreading carefully for these errors will enhance the letter's overall quality.

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