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Band 6+: You received an email from your email from your English friend, Tracy. She told you about the concert which she enjoyed with her family. Read part of her email below. "I have seen a concert with my family that it was interesting and I enjoyed a great day. Tell me the latest concert that you saw. Where did it take place? Whom did you go with? Is there anything interesting?" Write a letter to answer your friend's questions.

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Hi Tracy,

It’s great to hear that you have seen an interesting concert with your family.

Thank you for asking about the latest concert I have seen. The name’s concert is Viettel Y-fest, which was held at the Hanoi Opera House. I went to the concert with my best friend who is a huge fan of Son Tung MTP. Viettel’s concert invited a lot of famous artists and singers such as Son Tung MTP, Bich Phuong, Hieu Thu Hai, and Soobin Hoang Son, … The organization invested a big stage with a number of lights and laze. All of this made the performances become more excellent and admirable. Moreover, the crowd was very enthusiastic throughout the show, everyone kept dancing and singing out loud with the artist. The concert ended with the imposing firework, which impressed me greatly. It was definitely one of the best concerts I have ever seen. I am so excited to go to the Nhung Thanh Pho Mo Mang concert on this December, will you go with me?

I hope you will reply to my letter soon.

Love,

Linh

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

concert: 7

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Task Response

8.5

The letter successfully addresses all aspects of the task, providing a detailed and engaging response to the friend's questions.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized and easy to follow. However, some minor improvements in sentence flow and paragraph structure could enhance the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, with some sophisticated word choices. Minor improvements in word choice and precision could elevate the lexical resource to a higher band.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

While the letter displays a good range of grammatical structures, some minor grammatical errors and inconsistencies affect the overall accuracy and fluency.

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You received an email from your email from your English friend, Tracy. She told you about the concert which she enjoyed with her family. Read part of her email below. “I have seen a concert with my family that it was interesting and I enjoyed a great day. Tell me the latest concert that you saw. Where did it take place? Whom did you go with? Is there anything interesting?” Write a letter to answer your friend’s questions.

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