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Band 4+: You recently attended a course that was not as useful as you expected. Write a letter to the course organizer. You should include details about: - what you expected from the course - why you were disappointed - what you would like them to do about it.

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Hello, Mr.Smith.

Last week I participated in your course about teaching english correctly.But there were a lot of things to talk about and most of them were negative.I’ve read your profile and saw that you are new to this but I can point out some problems in your course leading.You stutter a lot and have a problem in speaking on public and that made speach pretty boring because of the wait we had to go throughout the course.

I thought it would be great way for me to master the way of teaching from other trachers but it came about as disappointment.

I can assist you by telling some tips to decrease the amount of your panic while you give your speech.Try to talk in front of the mirror and think it’s public it will help you to make crowd less scarier.Hope you achieve your best and you will be my great tutor

Dear,Dias

Great thanks

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4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task requirements by outlining expectations, disappointments, and a suggestion. However, the response includes some irrelevant information (offering tips to the course organizer) which detracts from the overall task achievement. To improve, focus on elaborating more on the expected benefits of the course and the specific ways in which it fell short, rather than shifting the focus to the organizer's public speaking skills.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of ideas is disjointed. The points are not presented in a logical order, making it difficult to follow the writer's train of thought. Consider structuring your letter more clearly, perhaps dedicating a paragraph to each of the points mentioned in the task (expectations, disappointments, and desired action). Using cohesive devices more effectively would also improve the letter's readability.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There are instances of inappropriate word choice. To improve, try to use a wider range of vocabulary that is more specific to the context of the letter. For example, instead of 'a lot of things to talk about,' you could use 'several areas of concern.' Focus on using more precise and varied language to express your ideas. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains frequent grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. These errors significantly impede understanding. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofreading carefully for errors before submitting your work is essential.

Band 4+: You recently attended a course that was not as useful as you expected. Write a letter to the course organizer. You should include details about: - what you expected from the course - why you were disappointed - what you would like them to do about it.

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