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Band 4+: You recently attended a short course or workshop that greatly benefited you. Write a letter to a friend recommending they take the same course/workshop. You should include details about: - what the course/workshop was about - why you found it so helpful - where and when they can take the course/workshop.

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Dear karno

I hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing to give an information about a shor course that useful in the future. Please allow me to elaborate it.

Recently i have just attended a short course in other city and i learned english so i thought english very important in the future because many companies will lokk for employee who can speak english. I have just remembered you would like to take course english so i inform to you about this news because of this news very benefit for us. If you are interested you can register by online. When you take course here and you have finished, you will be looked for a company and many students learned here they directly work in big company.

I hope you trust you can consider it carefully so that we will learn together because you are my best friend.

Your my best friend

Ronggo

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Overall Band Score

4.5
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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
course: 4
english: 4
because: 3
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Task Response

6
The letter addresses the task by describing the course, explaining its benefits, and providing sign-up details. However, the content is somewhat repetitive and lacks specific details about the course itself. To improve, provide more concrete information about the course content, teaching methods, and specific registration procedures. Also, focus on clear and concise language.

Coherence & Cohesion

4
The letter's organization is weak, making it difficult to follow the main points. Paragraphing is present but doesn't effectively separate ideas. Transitions between sentences and ideas are often abrupt, hindering the flow of information. To improve coherence, focus on creating a clear structure with a logical progression of ideas. Use transitional phrases to connect sentences and paragraphs, ensuring a smoother and more understandable message.

Lexical Resource

4
The vocabulary used is basic and lacks the precision needed to convey the message effectively. There is noticeable repetition of words and phrases, which limits the impact of the writing. To enhance lexical resource, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to the topic of the course and its benefits. Use a thesaurus to find synonyms and avoid repetition, and focus on using more specific and descriptive language to make your writing more engaging and informative.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3
The letter contains frequent grammatical errors that impede understanding. Sentence structure is often awkward, and there are issues with verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. To improve grammatical accuracy, focus on reviewing basic grammar rules and practicing sentence construction. Pay close attention to verb tenses and subject-verb agreement, and proofread carefully for errors before submitting your work. Consider using online grammar checkers or seeking feedback from a tutor to identify and correct recurring mistakes.

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