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Band 5+: You recently borrowed a book from a friend, but you accidentally damaged it. Write an email to your friend. In your email: explain what happened to the book apologise for the damage say what you will do to fix the problem

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Dear Noor,

I hope you are doing well. Last week I borrowed your novel it’s called “The Lazy Nights”. The novel was fascinating it taught me new morals ethics.

While reading this interesting novel I was having my cup of coffee in the same time. The latte mug was super hot and heavy. Unfortunately, I couldn’t handle it more because of the hotness it felt rapidly without the sudden feeling. I run fast to get some wipes but it couldn’t help the situation so I tried my best to clean the mess that I caused.

More and more, the issue became bigger and apperant when I called my Sister to help me out but she rapped the novel while she was trying to sweep the coffee spill out. I am writing this email because I want to apologize on this damage.

In addition, I thought of a compensation offer that would help the situation to be resolved in a timely manner. One reason for this, is because of the trust you gave me and I was not willing to turn it back in a good condition so I wish you accept my compensate. Since I was the only reason for the damage I would like to offer you 2 gifts. Firstly, Jane Eyre famous novels because I know that you like them. Secondly, let’s go on a camping trip I know this will make you feel better.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours faithfully,

Raghad Alajmi

Word Count: 246

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Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

novel: 4

because: 4

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by apologizing, explaining the damage, and suggesting compensation. The explanation of how the damage occurred is clear. The suggested compensation is relevant. To improve, ensure a more natural and less repetitive writing style. Vary sentence structure and avoid overly simplistic phrasing. Also, ensure that the tone remains consistently sincere and apologetic throughout the letter.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization could be improved for better flow. Consider dedicating a paragraph to each of the task's bullet points: apology, explanation, and compensation. Transition words could be used more effectively to link ideas and create a smoother narrative. For example, use phrases like 'To explain,' 'Therefore,' or 'As a result' to connect sentences and paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally adequate, but there's room to enhance it with more precise and varied word choices. For instance, instead of saying 'the issue became bigger and apperant,' you could use 'the damage became more extensive and noticeable.' Also, avoid informal language like 'rapped the novel.' Using a wider range of vocabulary will make the letter more engaging and demonstrate a better command of the English language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Focus on improving sentence structure and verb tense consistency. For example, correct 'The novel was fascinating it taught me new morals ethics' to 'The novel was fascinating and taught me new morals and ethics.' Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and correct punctuation to enhance the overall accuracy of your writing.

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