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Band 4+: You recently borrowed a valuable item from a friend, and unfortunately, it was damaged while in your possession. Write a letter to your friend explaining the situation. You should include details about: - describing how the damage occurred - expressing your regret and taking responsibility - suggesting a way to compensate for the damage.

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Dear Marco,

I brought your pen accidently two days ago, a pen that you got from your grandpa. I am really sorry for bringing it home without your permission. The worst news, now that pen is gone. Last night that pen still on my vision and am about to put it on my pencil case, but this morning I lost it. I alredy searching near my desk but still out of my search. You know i am such a terrible person for losing your heritage from your grandpa, and i am understand if you’re gonna be mad and don’t want to be my friend again after receiving this letter.

From my deepest heart I want to say sorry for brought then losing your valuable items beyond your knowledge. For expressing my regret I write this letter for you. If there’s a similar pen like yours at the stationary store I will buy it for you right away.

Word Count: 157

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Overall Band Score

4.5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6
The letter addresses the task by apologizing, explaining the loss, and suggesting compensation. However, the explanation of how the damage occurred is weak, and the suggested compensation is vague. To improve, provide a clearer explanation of the events leading to the loss and offer more concrete compensation options.

Coherence & Cohesion

4
The letter's organization is somewhat unclear, and the progression of ideas is not always smooth. The paragraphing could be improved to better separate the apology, explanation, and compensation proposal. Consider using more explicit transition words and phrases to guide the reader through your explanation and suggestions.

Lexical Resource

5
The vocabulary used is basic and somewhat repetitive. While the language conveys the message, it lacks the precision and sophistication needed for a higher score. Try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to apologies, explanations, and compensation. For example, instead of just saying 'sorry,' you could use phrases like 'I am deeply regretful' or 'I extend my sincerest apologies.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3
The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure. For example, 'I brought your pen accidently' should be 'I accidentally took your pen.' Also, the sentence 'Last night that pen still on my vision' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. Focus on using correct grammar and varied sentence structures to improve the overall quality of your writing.

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