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Band 5+: You recently bought a second-hand car from a company that sells used cars, but the car developed some problems. You have phoned, left messages and sent emails, but you have not heard anything from the company that sold you the car. Write a letter to the manager. In your letter explain the problems you have had in contacting the company, and explain your dissatisfaction describe the problems with the car tell the manager what you want him to do

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Dear John,

I recently bought BMW C160 from your city branch on 1st August and exactly after a week I am facing a noise issue with the car engine. I tried calling your branch and wrote multiple emails along with a few messages but no have get back to me.

Recently i was driving normally suddenly a noise started coming from the car engine and checked the engine but i noticed some broken wires out of nowhere. I tried contacting the sales manager via his email and sent a few messages on his phone number but the sales manager didn’t even send a reply back to me this made me very disappointed.

At the time of my deal with the sales manager, he gave the word that I can 6-month guarantee of my car but now he is ignoring me. Now i want to give his respond as earliest as possible and guide what should i do with my car and who will bear the cost of my car.

I am waiting for your manager response.

Regards,

Ali

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

manager: 4

engine: 3

sales: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task, but it could be more detailed and persuasive.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the flow could be improved with clearer transitions and more logical organization.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The letter uses a good range of vocabulary, but some choices could be more precise and sophisticated.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect the clarity and fluency of the message.

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