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Band 5+: You recently flew with an airline and had a problem with the food on the plane. Write a letter to the company. In your letter · give the details of the flight · explain what the problem with the food was · say what the airline should do about it.

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Dear Sir and Madam,

I am a passager of the airline last Sunday. My flight number is TR9, from Perth to Taipei. I am writing this letter to you since the food on that flight have some problems.

Firstly, it is my first time to take airplane by your company. I had heard that the food is amazing so I really expected beforeI take the flight. However, I was extremely disappointed of the meal. There have serveral issues, such as the meat was not fully cooked and the source smell weird. As the flight attendent said that is normally situation, so I still finished that meal.

However, I felt serious stomachache at the same day that I went to emergency to see a doctor immeditaly. After the doctor checked, he said my stomachache is from the meal I took on the flight and I had to stay in hospital until I recover. The attech with this letter which is my treatment recipe, I wonder ask the fully refund from your company.

I am looking forward of your reply.

Your sincerely,

Gin

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

flight: 5

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task, providing flight details, describing the food issue, and stating the desired compensation. Minor improvements in clarity and organization would enhance the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, some organizational and grammatical issues create minor disruptions in the flow. Improving sentence structure and paragraphing would significantly enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The letter uses a sufficient range of vocabulary. While some words are used accurately, more precise and sophisticated language would improve the overall lexical range and impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for enhancing the overall quality of the writing.

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Band 5+: You recently flew with an airline and had a problem with the food on the plane. Write a letter to the company. In your letter · give the details of the flight · explain what the problem with the food was · say what the airline should do about it.

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