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Band 5+: You recently had your car required and now it is not working properly write a letter your mechanic and in your letter Introduce yourself Explain the problem And say what you need him to do

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you in order to demonstrate my deep dissatisfaction regarding your work, and I will suggest alternatives as well.

I am Odiljonova Zilola who always choose your car repair shop as a best option. I visited your workshop on 5th of March during the afternoon. I was your loyal client until you made this mistake.

Last week, I noticed some issues related my car. My car horn was not working properly. Then I immediately called one of your workers, and they made me aware about their high costs. Despite this, I agreed to repair my car on your workshop because I always prioritize quality over costs. However, they cannot repair my car properly.

If you want to make amends for your past errors, you can fix my car horn or compensate for the damages.

I hope you will not be upset for my treatment to you and help me to solve my car issues as well.

Your faithfully,

Zilola

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

repair: 3

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Task Response

The letter does address the task, but it could be improved by more clearly explaining the problem and what needs to be done. The focus on dissatisfaction detracts from the core request.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's structure and flow could be improved. Some sentences are unclear and don't logically connect to each other, impacting the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate, but there's room for improvement in using more precise and natural language. Some word choices are slightly unnatural.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors that affect the clarity and overall impression of the letter. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial.

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