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Band 4+: You recently had your car required and now it is not working properly write a letter your mechanic and in your letter Introduce yourself Explain the problem And say what you need him to do

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I trust this letter will find you good health and great spirit.I am writing to about my car problems.Nowadays it is not working well.

My name is Selena.I am a student university of INHA.My relatives gave me car for my birthday present.

Last week I had visited your service.My car had repaired by mechanic.But today my car not working properly.This is aritited me.That’s why I was late my work.I could not explain my situation.Right now I am crying more.My expenses leave for your service 100$ it is much more amount for my daily expenses.

I would like that.You should compansate all of that.For instance you need to repairing my car.On the top of that cause of my problems sentences.Secondly I advise you.By the way you should give money compansate and for your mistake.

Thank you for hearing my review.I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Selena Gomez

Word Count: 154

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses the task but lacks clarity and organization. The explanation of the problem and the request for action are not clearly presented.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's structure and flow are disrupted by numerous grammatical errors and illogical transitions. Improving sentence structure and logical sequencing will enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks precision and sophistication. A wider range of vocabulary and more precise word choices would improve the overall quality.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly affect clarity and understanding. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for better communication.

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