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Band 5+: You recently had your car required and now it is not working properly write a letter your mechanic and in your letter Introduce yourself Explain the problem And say what you need him to do

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Dear sir

I am writing to express my concern regarding a recent repair service I received at your garage on Last week.

The brakes of my car had stopped working. They told me it was fixed, but after about 2 hours, it stopped working again, Also many other parts of my car are damaged trust that you Will I kindly request that you either refund my money or properly repair my car since I purchased it for a considerable amount of my money. My car has remained in the workshop for a long period, and as a result I have been unable to attend to many of my responsibilities. Therefore I kindly ask you to fix it more quickly this time I hope you can address this matter promptly and provide a suitable solution

Your’s faithfully

Rukhshana

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, more detail and clarity regarding the car's problems would improve the response. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, improved organization and flow would enhance readability and coherence.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate, but a wider range and more precise word choices would strengthen the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

While the letter conveys its message, grammatical errors and inconsistencies detract from the overall clarity and impact. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed.

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