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Band 6+: You recently helped your company organise an event at a hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter: - Provide details about the event - Mention what you particularly liked about the hotel - Suggest areas for improvement.

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Dear Mr. John,

I am writing this letter to inform you on how the event we held on the company went.

The event took place at pine wood hotel on Monday by 1:pm, where we had a lot of guest on that very day to attend to.

Furthermore, at the hostel there are sections inside the hotel environment that I preferred so well. Such as the swimming pool, long tennis, basket ball area, the garage, dance hall , conference room and the color of the hotel, but the one thing I liked about the hotel is how spacious it is.

Lastly, I would like to give my opinion on how to do more better in the next event coming on by next year. for instance, in the aspect of sharing of food, I would like it to be handled by the staff of the company, in other to avoid I didn’t eat during the event. Again, in the area of the sound system, I would like a professional DJ to handle such an event next time.

Thanks for your mutual understanding.

Yours Sincerely,

Nwokorie ThankGod

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

event: 5

hotel: 4

would: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by providing details about the event, mentioning aspects liked about the hotel, and suggesting areas for improvement. However, some points could be expanded upon for a more comprehensive response. To improve, provide more specific details about the event (e.g., the type of event, number of attendees) and elaborate on the suggested improvements (e.g., why the company staff should handle food, specific issues with the sound system).

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter generally addresses the task, but the organization could be improved for better flow. The introduction is somewhat abrupt. Consider starting with a clearer statement of purpose. The body paragraphs jump between details of the event, positive aspects of the hotel, and suggestions for improvement without clear transitions. Using topic sentences at the beginning of each paragraph would help guide the reader. For example, you could dedicate a paragraph solely to the event details, another to the hotel's positive aspects, and a final one to suggestions. The conclusion is brief but adequate. Ensure a smoother transition between ideas to enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally simple and functional, but there's room for improvement in using more precise and varied language. For instance, instead of saying 'a lot of guest,' you could say 'a significant number of guests.' Instead of 'do more better,' try 'improve.' Expanding your range of vocabulary would make the letter more engaging and professional. While the vocabulary is adequate for conveying the message, it lacks sophistication.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'on how the event we held on the company went' is awkward; consider rephrasing it to 'regarding the event our company held.' There are also issues with subject-verb agreement ('I didn't eat' should be 'I did not get a chance to eat') and preposition usage ('on Monday by 1:pm' should be 'on Monday at 1:00 PM'). Correcting these errors and using a wider range of sentence structures would improve the letter's grammatical accuracy and overall quality. Pay close attention to verb tenses, articles, and prepositions.

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