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Band 6+: You recently moved to a new neighbourhood and want to introduce yourself to your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter: introduce yourself explain why you moved to the area invite your neighbour to visit your home

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Dear Rana

I hope you are okay, my name is Danie, I just moved to my new home that is next to you last week. I am from Manchester, but I have a reason why I move to this place, because I moved here because of my new job at a local marketing company.

So far, I enjoy to live in this place, because the social environment is calm and friendly. However, I have been living here a short while, this atmosphere makes me feel happy. Because I am still try to getting know the community around here. I have opportunity for meet some of my neighbours, including you.

Therefore, I would like to invite you to go to my new home on Saturday night for a small dinner together. It is good for relationships among neighbours. You can bring your family as well.

I hope you can come to my new house and you can meet another neighbour.

See you soon!

Cheers

Danie

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

because: 4

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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all parts of the task, introducing yourself, explaining the reason for moving, and extending an invitation. The content is relevant and sufficient. To improve, consider adding a few more details to enhance the personal touch and make the invitation more specific (e.g., time of the dinner).

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally understandable, but the organization could be improved. Consider structuring your letter with a clear introduction, body paragraphs addressing each bullet point of the task, and a concise conclusion. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs could be smoother to enhance the flow of information.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, but there's room to incorporate more varied and precise language. For instance, instead of 'enjoy to live in this place,' you could say 'I am enjoying living in this area.' Expanding your vocabulary range will make your writing more engaging and effective. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Focus on improving sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and correct use of tenses. For example, 'I move to this place, because...' should be 'I moved to this place because...' Proofreading carefully and focusing on basic grammar rules will enhance the accuracy of your writing.

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