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Band 6+: You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job. Write a letter to the restaurant's manager. In your letter, explain that you would like to apply for the job give some details of any relevant experience that you have specify the days and times that would suit you

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Dear Sir / Madam,

I am writing to you to express my interest in your job advertisement for a chef at your restaurant that I was on an blog website. As I have currently moved from Toronto to Montreal as a qualified chef, I would like to apply for this position.

I noticed from the job description that you are looking for someone who can cook elegant dishes in healthy way. I believe that I am well suited for this job. My previous job was at Aux-Vivers an vegan restaurant I was assistant chef. Where I was responsible for designing menu and coming up with new and amazing recipes to present to head chef. I am also interested in preparing healthy dishes. I also was responsible for managing cleaning and serving staff of Aux-Vivers, in which I found I was able to build good working relationship with all the staff in my responsibility.

I noticed that this is a part-time job. My preferred days for working would be Monday, Wednesday and Sunday afternoon and evenings. I also am available during late night on those days and also would be able to work on two Saturdays of each month.

I look forward to hearing from you soon. Please let me know if you require further information.

Yours sincerely,

Tom

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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all requirements of the task, providing relevant details about the applicant's interest, experience, and availability. There are a few minor lapses in formality and some grammatical errors, but overall, the letter is well-organized and effectively communicates the necessary information. To improve, focus on refining sentence structure and ensuring consistent formality throughout the letter.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the organization could be improved. Consider grouping information more logically, such as dedicating a paragraph solely to your relevant experience and another to your availability. Also, ensure smooth transitions between sentences and paragraphs to enhance the flow of your letter.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement. Try to use more precise and varied language to describe your skills and experiences. For example, instead of saying 'amazing recipes,' you could use more descriptive adjectives like 'innovative' or 'delicious' recipes. Also, avoid using informal language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors throughout the letter that affect clarity. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and proper punctuation. For example, 'I was on an blog website' should be 'I saw on a blog website.' Proofread carefully to catch and correct these errors.

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