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Band 5+: You recently ordered some books online. However, you have not received them as yet. This has created a lot of inconvenience for you, especially as you are doing some research for which you need the books immediately. Write a letter to the authority in-charge to convey your dissatisfaction about the delay. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain why you are dissatisfied • say what you want him/her to do

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Dear sir,

I am writing this letter about my books. Which is ordered by online. I purchased the item on flipkart. Two books were selected by me. First Book [lelts general training) And second book [hobes stories] First book is for my younger brother he need to prepare for their exam. The book is very helpful to preparation. Second book for me. I want to read hobes Business journey. But we have to face lot of inconvenience. About your service. We do not understand what can i do for get my order. My brother’s exam date coming soon. Unfortunately he face study related problems. Which is resolve from your books.

I really want both item. You need to track our order. Where the problem if you send from your place. Please do something for and research. Where and what is the issue. I hope you will understand about my concern.

I really looking forward your positive reply. Thank you very much.

Yours sincerely

Shuaib alam

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A2 - Upper Beginner
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Task Response

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Lexical Resource

4.5

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Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

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