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Band 5+: You recently ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: - Explain what you ordered and what was missing from your delivery - Explain the importance of this delivery - Ask for a replacement item to be sent

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the last delivery, which was not complete. I ordered a smartwatch of the company Boat including charger. Unfortunately, the charger was missing when the delivery arrived on 20th November 2024.

Since I ordered it for my brother as a surprise birthday gift, I am highly disappointed with your service. In addition to the missing item, the delivery was delayed for 2 days according to the mentioned date when I ordered the item. Due to this, I was not able to gift the product on time which I never missed since last 6 years.

To avoid this circumstance, I would appreciate it if you could send me a replacement of this product at the earliest. Moreover kindly assure that the box contains all the required accessories.

I look forward for your prompt response and I hope to get a proper replacement.

Yours faithfully,

Daniel Simon

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

delivery: 3

ordered: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The explanation of the order and missing item is clear. The importance of the delivery is explained, and a clear request for a replacement is made. Minor improvements in clarity could enhance the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is generally easy to follow, but the flow could be improved in places. Some sentences could be restructured for better clarity and cohesion. Paragraphing is acceptable but could be refined.

Lexical Resource

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, mostly used accurately. More sophisticated vocabulary choices could be incorporated to enhance the overall lexical range.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While the letter is understandable, there are several grammatical errors that affect the overall fluency and accuracy. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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