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Band 9: You recently ordered something online. When the delivery came it was not complete. Write a letter to the company. In your letter: - Explain what you ordered and what was missing from your delivery - Explain the importance of this delivery - Ask for a replacement item to be sent

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to inform you that an item was missing from an order recently delivered to me.

Last week I ordered a wedding gown from your bridal website. I chose a model with two pieces : a dress and its assorted veil. Unfortunately, the dress came without the veil. This is a problem because I bought my heeled shoes in accordance with the veil’s design and colour.

This delivery is very important because I am getting married in three weeks, and there aren’t any bridal stores in my area. Furthermore, I will fall short of time if I order from another website and the dress does not fit. I am sure you can understand that, without the veil, the outfit is incomplete. Given the price of the dress, this is completely unacceptable.

I would be grateful if you could send me a replacement veil as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully,

Jane Doe

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The letter appropriately satisfies the requirements of the task. The content is relevant, well-organized, and clearly explains the situation, the importance of the missing item, and the desired action. The tone is polite and professional.

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The letter is very well-organized and easy to follow. The paragraphing is logical, and the transitions between ideas are smooth, contributing to a clear and coherent message.

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The letter demonstrates a sophisticated use of vocabulary, appropriate for the context. The word choices are precise and contribute to the overall professional tone of the letter.

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The letter exhibits excellent grammatical control and accuracy. The sentence structures are varied and complex, and there are no noticeable errors in grammar or punctuation.

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