🔥 Today Only: Save 30% on Premium — Offer Ends Soon! - Upgrade Now!

Letter

Band 6+: You recently spent a night in a hotel and had to put up with a great deal of noise very early in the morning because of a faulty central heating system. The manager promised to contact you regarding compensation but you still haven't heard from him. Write a letter to the hotel. In the letter describe the problem at the hotel explain what the manager had said at the time say what you want the manager to do.

See all user-written answers on this topic

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Check it out

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

Dear Sir/Madam

Hope you doing are well. I would like your attention to the situation that I faced when I was staying in your hotel Taj Empire. I booked your hotel on 3rd January for 2 nights. When I booked my room the booking person did not inform me about the issue that the central heating system was having.

I had a very bad experience at night. It was hard for me and my family to sleep due to the constant noise from the central heating system. We tried to call the night staff but there was no response from them. Later in the morning, we called the manager of your hotel, his name is Mrs. Raj Patel. He was nice and he also paid attention to our problem. He offered us compensation, which will be provided for this situation through my email.

It’s been almost 2 weeks, and I haven’t received any email from your hotel’s manager. I request you to update the respected manager to send us the compensation email as promised. I would also like to share that the overall experience of staying at your hotel was amazing and we will surely rebook your place to stay again.

Yours faithfully,

Krusha Patel

Word Count: 205

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

6

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

hotel: 4

manager: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The description of the problem, the manager's promise, and the request for action are all clearly presented. Minor improvements in clarity and structure could elevate the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly easy to follow. However, some organizational and structural issues, along with grammatical errors, slightly affect the overall flow and coherence. Improved paragraphing and sentence structure would enhance readability.

Lexical Resource

6

The letter demonstrates a satisfactory range of vocabulary. While the language is generally appropriate, more precise and sophisticated word choices could improve the overall impact. The vocabulary is functional but could be more varied and precise.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect the clarity and fluency. While some grammatical structures are used correctly, more accurate and varied sentence structures are needed to achieve a higher score. The errors detract from the overall impression.

Answers On The Same Topic:

You recently spent a night in a hotel and had to put up with a great deal of noise very early in the morning because of a faulty central heating system. The manager promised to contact you regarding compensation but you still haven’t heard from him. Write a letter to the hotel. In the letter describe the problem at the hotel explain what the manager had said at the time say what you want the manager to do.

Dear Sir or Madam, The reason why I am writing is to explain the issue I experienced during my recent stay at your hotel and to mention that I have not been contacted by the manager regarding the promised compensation. Two days ago, I spent a night at your hotel in order to relax and […]

Band 8+

You recently spent a night in a hotel and had to put up with a great deal of noise very early in the morning because of a faulty central heating system. The manager promised to contact you regarding compensation but you still haven’t heard from him. Write a letter to the hotel. In the letter describe the problem at the hotel explain what the manager had said at the time say what you want the manager to do.

Dear Sir or Madam, The reason why I am addressing you is that I want to inform about noise which comes from a faulty central heating system very early in the morning and also tell you that your staff who promised me to fix this situation last week. However it has not changed yet. Secondly, […]

Band 4+

You recently spent a night in a hotel and had to put up with a great deal of noise very early in the morning because of a faulty central heating system. The manager promised to contact you regarding compensation but you still haven’t heard from him. Write a letter to the hotel. In the letter describe the problem at the hotel explain what the manager had said at the time say what you want the manager to do.

Dear sir/madam I am writing this to express my annoyance with your hotel services. Last week I spent my vacation in Goa and decided to stay at your renowned hotel “Hard Rock”, but it resulted in the biggest mistake to book your hotel during my vacation. From the first day of my stay, I have […]

Band 6+

You recently spent a night in a hotel and had to put up with a great deal of noise very early in the morning because of a faulty central heating system. The manager promised to contact you regarding compensation but you still haven’t heard from him. Write a letter to the hotel. In the letter describe the problem at the hotel explain what the manager had said at the time say what you want the manager to do.

Dear Sir/Madam, I hope you are doing well. I am writing to bring to your attention an issue I encountered during my recent stay at Taj Empire on January 3rd, where I booked a room for two nights. Unfortunately, I was not informed at the time of booking that the central heating system was faulty. […]

Band 9

See All

Other Topics:

You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised that you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: ● thank your friend for the holiday ● explain that you left your wallet in their house ● give them instructions for how to send it back to you

Dear liz, Hope all is well.I am writting this letter in regards of my wallet that i forgot at your place when i visited you for holiday. First of all, I would like to thank you for giving me and and my kids a wonderful and tremedous stay at your place,We really had a nice […]

Band 5+

You recently had a minor mishap (e.g., lost your keys, had a small accident, or forgot something important) and need help from a friend. Write a letter to your friend asking for their assistance. You should include details about: what happened and how it affected you; exactly what help you need and why you chose them; when you would need the help and how you can thank them or repay them.

Hi Joe! It’s out of nowhere, but I really need your help. I accidentally lost my house key. Can you duplicate it? It’s really important to me. I lost it yesterday, so I just slept in my office. I can’t handle it anymore, I really miss my house and my bed. I’ve been searching for […]

Band 5+

You recently started a new hobby, such as painting or gardening, and you have become quite enthusiastic about it. You want to encourage a friend who is feeling a bit down to try it as well. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: describe your new hobby and why you enjoy it; suggest how it might help your friend feel better; propose a time when you could do this activity together.

Dear Osman, I hope this message finds you well, I have recently got into running in the mornings after being influenced by some friends from the gym. As you know, I have a very bad habit of smoking and vaping. To reverse the damage I started running in a group with 5 of my friends […]

Band 7+

You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Describe the training course you want to do Explain what the company could do to help you Say how the course will be useful for your job

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to you regarding an advertisment which I recently came across, about a training course of “AI and Automation” on the internet. This aforementioned course is specifically designed for working professionals, both in terms of the content structure as well as the class’ timings. However, I would only be […]

Band 7+

You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Describe the training course you want to do Explain what the company could do to help you Say how the course will be useful for your job

Dear Mr Hashemi, I am writing to bring to your attention a training course, which will be held by Oxford University on September 25 for 2 weeks in the USA, and I would like to participate in the course, as it can have a positive impact on my job. The course is about how to […]

Band 8+

You have a friend who is coming to visit you in your town next month. However, you will be away on a business trip during their visit. Write a letter to your friend. You should include details about: the reason you will be away; an alternative plan to meet them (e.g., suggest a different time or arrange for a mutual friend to host them); a suggestion of places they could visit or activities they could do in your absence.

R.roy, No,61, logi street, Colombo, 2nd of October. Dear friend, I am fine and I hope you the same, I received your email my pal and that told you will plan to visit my town next month and hanging out me and my colleagues. Unfortunately, I’ll have a important business meeting in my office. Also […]

Band 5+

See All