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Band 4+: You recently stayed at a hotel and had a disappointing experience. Write a letter to the hotel manager explaining the problems you faced, how they affected your stay, and what actions you expect them to take.

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Hello Sir/Madam

I am writing to express my extreme disappointment regarding my stay at nishat hotel.

I had booked this hotel for my five days stay here and i booked the most expensive room but the room i got was in a miserable condition, there was no air conditioning in the room, it was so untidy seems like the sheets has not been cleaned from past 3 months and when i called the room service to complain them about this they said go to the management that’s not their headache.

I had my meetings arranged for the days i had booked the hotel but the environment in this hotle messed up all my schedule and i had to delay them. I lose a lot of my hard earned money and my wife precious time.

I neither want any refund nor an apology but i do recommend to the hotel management to work on their clients satisfaction otherwise they will lose their valueable customer.

Yours faithfully

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Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

booked: 3

hotel: 3

their: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by outlining the problems, their impact, and expectations. However, it could benefit from a more structured approach to presenting the issues and a clearer articulation of desired actions.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's message is mostly understandable, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and abrupt transitions between points. Improved sentence structure and paragraphing would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is sufficient, but lacks range and precision. More sophisticated word choices would improve the overall impact and professionalism of the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Numerous grammatical errors significantly affect the clarity and overall quality of the letter. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for achieving a higher score.

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