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Band 5+: You recently took a trip and lost a valuable item. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel where you stayed.

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Dear Sir/Madame

To whom it may concer, my name is Amanda Schmitt and yesterday friday I went to watch Toy Story 3 in the hotel at 15:00. Unfourtanely I have lost my jacket in the room.

I wondery if someone have found my Jacket and the hotel have save it. The jacket is a puffy white yacket, brand Northface, inside of one pocket is a red pen, the key from my home and a bill from the restoran from the hotel.

I have left the room 5 min after the film end, probably I do not saw that the jacket was in the seat next to me, and with the lights off was more dificult see arround.

In case that the hotel found my jacket, I will happy if you can contact me by phone. I can go and pick up before 14:00pm

My phone number is 333000555

Hopefully you have found it.

Yours faithfully,

Amanda Schmitt

Word Count: 157

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Overall Band Score

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
Aim to use more advanced language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

jacket: 5

hotel: 3

found: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter effectively conveys the purpose of the letter and provides sufficient details about the lost item. However, it could be improved by being more concise and organized.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally easy to follow, but the flow could be smoother with better sentence structure and transitions.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The letter uses a good range of vocabulary, but some words are used incorrectly or in an awkward way.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect the clarity and fluency of the writing.

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