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Band 6+: You recently visited a friend's house and realized that you left something important behind. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Tell them what item you forgot. Explain why the item is important to you. Suggest how they can send it back to you.i

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Hi Serdar ,

I hope this message finds you well. I really enjoyed spending time with you last week and I sincerely appreciate your hospitatily.

However, I am writing to tell you that I realized I left and important item at your house after returning home.

Unfortunately, the item in question is a laptop in a black bag, containing an exteranl hard drive that holds both my personal projects and important documents. İt is significant for my work and studio projects, so I would be extremely gratefull if you could help me about delivering it.

Whenever, if possible could you please send it back to me by carg? I will, definitely, cover any delivery costs. Furthermore, I would like to really appreciate it if you could let me know when you sent it.

Thank you very much for your support an understanding again. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best regards,

Ümit Celal Külekçi..

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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all parts of the task, clearly stating the forgotten item, its importance, and a suggestion for its return. The tone is polite and friendly. To improve, consider adding more specific details about the laptop or the urgency of needing it back to further enhance the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent and the message is clear. However, there are some areas where the flow could be improved. For instance, the transition between explaining the importance of the item and suggesting how to return it could be smoother. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas within paragraphs and between them. Paragraphing is adequate, but could be refined to better group related ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of range and sophistication. While the language is generally appropriate, using more varied and precise vocabulary could enhance the letter. For example, instead of 'help me about delivering it,' you could use a more specific phrase like 'assist me with its return' or 'help arrange its delivery.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains grammatical errors and inaccuracies that affect clarity. There are issues with punctuation, spelling ('hospitatily', 'exteranl', 'carg'), and sentence structure. While the overall message is understandable, these errors detract from the letter's impact. Focus on proofreading carefully to catch these mistakes. Also, pay attention to correct word usage and sentence construction to improve grammatical accuracy.

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